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MJV Writings - Writing Coach Helping Writers Put Pen To Paper

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A smooth and pleasant experience!! It was a real pleasure to work with Michael. He is a great storyteller and put a lot of dedication and effort into his work. The final delivery has exceeded my expectations. The turnaround was quick, and Michael was extremely communicative throughout the process. I highly recommend Michael if you want to get some great creative ideas and inspiration to kick-start your storytelling journey!!

Ray

Michael was more than a pleasure to work with and I cannot express how cordial, considerate, creative and committed he was to my ideas. He delivered on everything promised and has been flexible with my feedback. It truly felt like a meaningful collaboration. Thank you again good sir!

Brock

Michael is great. he jumped onto the outline for the third book in a series and managed to not only understand what had happened before, but run with it and provide a great outline that sets up the future novels. I look forward to working with him for the rest of the series!

Adam

Michael was very communicative and honest, providing great feedback. I could tell that he had a lot of experience and loves what he does! The service was beyond my expectations! It was well worth the money; I believe I got way more for my money actually. The tips, feedback, ideas were invaluable. He really took time to understand my idea, and he put a lot of effort into making the outline. I felt like he cared for my project like his own. I definitely recommend him! I am BEYOND satisfied and enjoyed working with him!

Alex

I am very pleased with the quality of my order. I can tell that there was a lot of hard work put into this (something I could have never done on my own). Now I have an outline and lots of tips to start writing my book. I'm very pleased and would 100 percent recommend him to anyone wanting to write a book and need some guidance. I will definitely buy again in the future when I'm ready to start my next book. Thank you so much.

Angelica

Working with Michael was a pleasure! He gave very clear information which absolutely anyone could use to move forward. And it's open ended enough to be adapted which is what I was looking for. Excellent writing skills, very prompt replies and on time.

Kay

I am absolutely blown away at the precision, accuracy, and comprehension used to elevate my current outline into one of greatness. I had no idea that an outline could be this detailed and helpful. Michael meticulously created an outline for my book that surpassed my expectations. His expertise and love for writing was seen within the final outline and even in the answers to every question I had about the gig. There are other outliners and writers--then there is Michael. Do not make the mistake of missing out on someone who is as gifted as he is. Let this review be your sign to move forward with Michael. I am looking forward to working with him in the future.

Jonquette

Michael is an outstanding pro in the field of ghostwriting. After our initial communication, he ran with my brief and delivered an outstanding andextremely well-researched outline. He furthermore guided me eloquently on how to best brief my ghostwriter. What a stellar job Michael. Your experience and structured approach to the project blew my mind. You are herewith on my team! So grateful for your guidance.

Nico

Michael was easy to work with, and delivered amazing work! He brought so much more to the outline of my book than I could have, bringing unique insight into the structure, form, and story. Bravo.

Ben

Michael has gone above and beyond with the value he has provided over the last couple of days. I received nothing but 110% from before the order was even placed all the way to order completion. Knowledgeable guidance and brutally honest advice which anyone could appreciate. I have made a few orders on fiverr in the past all for completely different things... but never have I found 'value for money' as I have with Michael. Your help is greatly appreciated and I look forward to working with you again on my next project :)

Nat

This guy is the real deal! I am truly amazed at the depth of his detail! His work is impeccable and HIGHLY researched. Very communicative and highly responsive. Extremely easy to converse with and he will not quit until you are satisfied.

Lola

Great feedback, and suggestions, as usual. I have used his services a few times, and will continue to use him going forward. I recommend him for whatever project you are seeking a beta for. His advice will help polish your project.

Cat

Michael was amazing. I walked away from our call with so much clarity, and he even sent some detailed notes of our conversation. This was definitely the first of many, as I know he'll be a great resource for my writing projects!

Dusty

Michael Jaymes did AMAZING work! His professionalism and eloquence exceeded my expectations, providing a great outline for my book and impactful keynote speaking material. Working with him was a breeze due to his proactive communication and high level of cooperation. Highly recommend for brainstorming and sharing ideas! 👌

K. P.

Michael was responsive, straight forward, organized, and encouraging about my project. He made sense of my vast array of ideas and gave them the structure that I was deeply needing to make a book a reality. I can’t wait to hire him again for his thorough editing and alpha reading services. He was a diamond in the rough to find clearly an expert in his craft. He will not disappoint!!

Sarah

Great feedback and even took the liberty to do extra research about my project and provide me with relevant materials to succeed.

Josh

Michael was adaptable to my kinda strange request, delivered stuff on time, and provided great feedback. I'd highly recommend him to anyone else looking for initial feedback/concept review on their writing. 101/10 nothing but good things to say about him.

Scott

Hire Michael while you can still afford him! What an incredible experience, professional, upfront, very helpful for a first timer hiring a researcher. The research provided was more complete and detailed than I had ever hoped of it being, will take some time to really parse out. Couldn't be happier, will be buying his gigs for as long as I can afford him lol. Thank you again Michael!

J. H.

Amazing alpha read of my current draft. Highly informative. I would definitely consider rehiring once I'm further in/finished my first draft. Attention to detail was very high as was the quality of work done. My only concern was price, it was a little high but still fair for what was provided (and accounting for speed).

Chev

After struggling to finish my book (over an extended period of time) I chose Michael's gig to help me redo my outline. He took the outline and restructured it so now the content makes sense and will actually help the reader. I feel a renewed sense of enthusiasm to finish my book now that I have a clear roadmap to follow. He offered encouragement and helpful direction on the path forward. When this book is finally published, I will remember Michael and the impact he made on my book.

Janet

It is a delight to work with Michael. I did an evaluation edit for my outline. Michael has a great understanding of how plots and outlines work, and can pinpoint the exact problems I need to work on for my project. On top of that, he also provides useful step-by-step guidance on how to create a great outline. He is responsive, polite, and you can tell he really wants to help the author succeed.

R. F.

Great, thorough, and insightful feedback. I’ve been struggling with the intro to my novel for some time, but couldn’t figure out exactly how to fix it. His comments and suggestions helped me verbalize my main issues (which means I can properly address it! Yay!)

Kelly

Amazing editor! Working with Michael has helped me grow as a writer immensely :)

Gabby

It was an amazing experience. Each time I return to Michael, I learn more and elevate my writing. I'm so grateful for his valuable support in writing my new book.

Joe

Michael always deliver concise and actionable feedback. I appreciate his candor in his comments and suggestions and my manuscript will only be better because of them. Thank you so much and i look forward to sending you more. Thank you!

Margo

Working with Michael was an absolute pleasure. His guidance throughout the process was invaluable, elevating my story to its fullest potential. I'm truly grateful for his editing expertise and dedication to ensuring every detail shines. Many thanks!

Dean

Michael was very helpful, he provided thorough feedback on my story outline and also made some concrete suggestions for how it could be improved. His line-by-line comments were valuable for getting an understanding of how a reader might view my story. I look forward to developing the outline with him further.

Rhys

Michael is obviously incredibly knowledgeable about writing and had spent considerable time and effort on his feedback. The feedback itself was insightful, constructive and has helped me enormously. Not just with the story itself but writing in general. Well worth the money, thank you.

Andrew

Yet another exceptional experience. His insights consistently elevate the narrative, providing nuanced feedback that is both detailed and accessible. I highly recommend his services for any manuscript assistance you may require. His profound mastery of the craft is evident, making him a valuable resource for refining your work.

Cat

Great communication! Tons of great feedback that's easily incorporated into my writing. Lots of helpful explanations for the feedback he gave, which helps me improve my writing and adjust some of the feedback to fit my style. This was a great experience and I plan to have him edit future writing :)

Hayden

Perfection! He made sure to know every detail of my story so he could provide the best outline. Even made suggestions on how I could switch it up to make the story better. I can't wait to write and final make this story come to life.

Chey

Michael was a great help with editing my project. After a year of work I was growing blind to its faults, and he helped point where it was flawed and inconsistent. He also indicated where my story telling worked and didn't work, and where the reader's attention started failing. I would definitely work with him again.

John

Really good experience. Michael is very skilled and talented with storytelling. My ideas were read and I received a fantastic outline that shows the events and moments, themes and growth, and all the big things a story needs to be complete and resonant when written. Great communication the whole time. Very experienced. I appreciate the step by step guide Michael created and explained. Very helpful! Thank you. Can't wait for more!

Daniel

When you are starting out writing and you know you need specific answers and critique or even if you are experienced and need someone to "read between the lines" Michael does just that. He gave me direct explanation at what my writing was missing with incredible insight. He is worth every penny! He is clearly a professional at what he does. He isn't just going to say what he likes or dislikes. He is going to give you a REAL analysis of your work and LITERALLY critique every line. THIS is what I was looking for when I said I wanted an alpha reader. The exciting part is going to be fixing everything and then having him read it again like a proud coach lol. Thank you Michael

Mercedes

Michael's notes, as usual, were very helpful. He always picks up mistakes in my initial drafts and offers feedback to improve them. This time was no different. Even with the amount of content being smaller, he still showed how rewording even the smallest paragraphs makes the biggest difference.

William

Michael has done another excellent job. His research is detailed and comprehensive. I recommend him to anyone wanting a detailed, well-researched outline for their book.

Sherreeh

You cannot ask for a more attentive reader. Great at identifying issues you might have missed.

EJ

It was a pleasure working with Michael Jaymes and I hope this is just the beginning of a long-term business relationship. He is professional and highly competent at his craft. He kept me updated on his progress and the finished project exceeded expectations. I highly recommend his services!

Glen

Offered great insight with information that included specific examples of how to improve my writing. I look forward to working with him throughout my writing journey.

Danny

I am blown away by Michael's expertise. After he did his magic on my latest book, I will be a repeating customer and put Michael on a retainer for as long as I am a writer. WOW!

Ed

Reviews taken directly from my Fiverr profile found here: https://www.fiverr.com/michaelvitelli

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